Monday, April 11, 2016
What impression of your main character do you have so far?
Tally is very adventurous and curious. That tells me she's always out and about looking for new things. We've learned that Tally is always not in Ugly town she in Pretty town. She really wants to become a pretty she's even made herself look like a pretty on a computer. She loves hoverboarding, she loves her best friend Shay and her best friend Peris. She doesn't like being ugly or being left alone because when Peris turned a Pretty she couldn't see him anymore so Tally had to find another friend and she found Shay. I dislike my character because she really wants to become a pretty and she doesn't think she's pretty she doesn't have self confidence like Shay. SHe wants to get platic surgery so she can becom a different person. Tally doesn't love who she really is.
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I agree that Tally is adventurous. I also agree that Tally is very curious in many different ways. I also dislike Tally because she is wanting to becoming a pretty.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your first sentence it really stands out. Your last sentence was so true its like the meaning of the book. The length of your passage is perfect.
ReplyDeleteYour very first sentence really is what Tally is all about. I like how you included things that she loves to do and people she loves like hoverboarding and Shay. I also don't like Shay for the reason you said and a ton other reasons like how she is always sneaking into pretty town which is breaking the rules and I don't like that.
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