Monday, April 11, 2016

(Alex G.) Opinions about Tally

Tally is a girl that only thinks about being pretty. Tally is almost 16 and that is when she will turn pretty. She only has to wait about 3 more monthsTally's best friend, Peris, is already pretty and Tally wants to see him every day because he's a pretty. She is very annoying, because all she talks about is becoming pretty. Tally has a habit of going to the pretty side of town. She wants to go over all the time, but it is risky. She could get caught.

Tally likes all the pretties. Whenever she can she will look at one for a long time. Tally doesn't want to be an ugly. Tally almost dislikes the uglies. I don't like Tally at all. She is very annoying. The only thing she talks about is becoming a pretty. She doesn't like herself as an ugly. She only wants to be a pretty and that is all she cares about. 

4 comments:

  1. I agree with you Tally only thinks about being a pretty. She never likes herself as an ugly. Tally is being very annoying by thinking uglies are disgusting and pretties are the best.

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  2. I agree with you on all of this. You took the words right out of my mouth. What do you think about Peris? Who is your favorite character?

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  3. Although I like Tally, you make many good points about Tally's way of thinking. You include many facts that are in the story. I agree with you that Tally wants to be pretty, and that's all she thinks about.

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  4. I agree with you 100%. Tally only wants her surgery. She wants it so much she gave up her friend and told on her for running off. I think that what happens to tally will be her fault. She only cares about her.

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