One thing I would say to Tally is,"You should go for David and ditch Peris." I would say this because it sounds like Tally really likes him. Also, the only thing holding Tally back from not wanting to become a Pretty at all is that Peris is a Pretty. David excepts Tally for who she is but Peris doesn't want to talk to her until she is Pretty. David treats Tally really good. Peris will only except Tally is she is Pretty.
I would also say to Tally that she should tell David the truth now. Tally told herself she has to tell him some time so why not get it over with now? The longer she waits the stringer her relationship with David will grow. Then once she tells him he will be crushed. Tally just needs to tell David now so they can both just get it over with.
Another thing I would say to Tally is that she should tell Dr.Cable the truth. She has already betrayed her friends and she is pretty sure that she doesn't want to become pretty, so just tell her. Tally should just say that she doesn't want to work for her anymore and that she wants to help the Smokeys. Then when she tells her friends she betrayed them, she can say that she was really on there side though and doesn't want to help Dr. Cable. She should just tell Dr. Cable the truth and that she doesn't want to be pretty anymore.
I agree about the David part. I think that Tally shouldn't tell Dr.Cable because if she does that would be bad. Tally could get in serious trouble for not wanting to become pretty and committing treason.
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